Mr. E - Dead Presidents (Political Hip Hop)

This is actually me, I am an underground emcee. Let me know what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oNdyzYHJQQM

Very nice! I often hear you breath in, but that ain't really a problem.
It is awesome that you rap about something else than money, women and fame (like some other rappers).

Keep it up, but try to make your own beats if you can.

Is this your first rap or do you have others? It doesn't sound like it is the first rapping you do.
I am not a professional at rapping or hip hop, but I really love listening to hip-hop / rap.

Thank for the response man!
Nah i been rapping for years. I do make my own beats, just really thought the beat along with the Nas sample made the song.
Look at this way, the breaths I take prove that I dont punch lines. That was one take